Eh, still too fast.
I couldn't read half of them, and supposedly I'm a fast reader. Give the different laws like ten to fifteen seconds. I can never bring myself to give anything about eights to things with no animation either, maybe have an animation of someone peeing in an elevator during that law. The laws I were able to read were very funny, good job with those. Other than that, I didn't really enjoy this. It lacked even music.
Your crtiticism is valid and I shall take note of that. And about the music problem, yeah you are forgiven =D
I liked the first Jerry, and I was expecting something similar when I saw this. I was is for a surprise, though--While it had some of the same, dark overtone, it was FUNNY. And that was something I never thought I'd see in a Jerry cartoon. When he first opened the closet door and it was empty, I thought, "Oh, it's just an empty closet. Maybe he'll get pushed in and locked in?"
...I proceeded to nearly pee myself when everything started. Funny, sad, scary. I guess he regained his hair color though. Great movie, hopefully we can see some of his teen years?
Not very good.
The motion itself was good for a sprite movie, but the rest was horrible. At the beginning, I sort of thought that it was just going to be that again and again. The power ups came far too quickly, too. It was almost as if they were saying, "OH MY GOD I'VE BEEN HIT ONCE I'VE GOT TO MAKE MYSELF STRONG BEYOND BELIEF FOR NO APPARENT REASON!" The text color and size also made it extremely difficult to see against that background. The fight itself seemed very lazy as well. I didn't like this at all.
Very funny, but that was its only strong point. The animation could have used some work (yeah, I know, deadline). Also, while you were talking, it was possible to hear you shifting around. Also, question... was your "ninja costume" one of the fake bits? Because I have no idea how your teacher couldn't have noticed, unless you changed in the closet. Which I doubt you had time to do. It was a good movie overall; I laughed at the end. And I thought you would be a good friend and give it back...
Me in the ninja outfit was obviously fake. The contest was (is, technically there's still until midnight to enter) to prove your ninja skills. I added the costume just to be a bit more qualified.
Plus at the time I felt like a badass ninja
Best I've seen in a long time
That was the best movie EVER. I can't imagine what I might say wrong about this. Usually, I only give 10s to people that a not only had nothing wrong, but had amazingly good things in it. Where can I download this song? This is one of the funniest things I have ever seen.
Okay, first of all, I don't give a tiny piece of crap that you're twelve. No one should bias their review that way. I liked how the animation was complicated, and everything connected, swirled, and moved. It could definitely have been smoother, however, and while the music was interesting at first, but it gradually grew to be annoying as hell, forcing me to turn my sound of. When you look at the whole of it though, it's good for a first time submission.
I was gonna finish it nup earlier but i couldnt finish it off properly.
I loved the style, it's the first time I've ever seen it on Newgrounds. I am interested by the story though... am I right that the child is kidnapped, beaten, and now hurt and alone? Is he dead? I can't wait till the next episode! ...in hopefully less then a year.
Check out David Firth's paper flash. Heavily inspired by him.
I liked the way characters moved. It was very flexible. It was far too short in any case. If it had been longer, the music would have been better. In this case, however, it was just starting up when the music ended. You should also have either put in a build up scene while waiting for the music to begin. You probably also could have edited the music. The fight scene, although it was animated well, was far to short. It was an okay movie all in all, but I think that you can do a lot better.
thanks, it helped alot.
I really liked the movie. It was not only violent, it had awesome music. I was very happy with this. I didn't like the way the characters moved, though, the lack of arms made it kind of slow. Good work, though.
I liked the movie, but it was sort of slow. All you did was type text, and it looked like a very small amount of effort was put into the animation. I thought it would be a lot better if, instead of taking pictures off the internet, to actually animate the actions. Like, show the mother scrambling over the glass wall. Also, There Were A Few Capitalization Mistakes. I am not an english teacher, but I read a lot, and those bother me, so I thought I'd let you know. Also, not to seem too retarted, but how is this for a mom joke: Your mom is so dumb she didn't know she was a man!"
Don't hate me for that.
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