Shmoil's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Singapore Crazy Laws]

Eh, still too fast.

I couldn't read half of them, and supposedly I'm a fast reader. Give the different laws like ten to fifteen seconds. I can never bring myself to give anything about eights to things with no animation either, maybe have an animation of someone peeing in an elevator during that law. The laws I were able to read were very funny, good job with those. Other than that, I didn't really enjoy this. It lacked even music.

CoarseOne responds:

Your crtiticism is valid and I shall take note of that. And about the music problem, yeah you are forgiven =D

[Why I'm a Ninja]

Good movie.

Very funny, but that was its only strong point. The animation could have used some work (yeah, I know, deadline). Also, while you were talking, it was possible to hear you shifting around. Also, question... was your "ninja costume" one of the fake bits? Because I have no idea how your teacher couldn't have noticed, unless you changed in the closet. Which I doubt you had time to do. It was a good movie overall; I laughed at the end. And I thought you would be a good friend and give it back...

GAMEGOBLIN responds:

Me in the ninja outfit was obviously fake. The contest was (is, technically there's still until midnight to enter) to prove your ninja skills. I added the costume just to be a bit more qualified.

Plus at the time I felt like a badass ninja

[Gamma]

Good work.

Okay, first of all, I don't give a tiny piece of crap that you're twelve. No one should bias their review that way. I liked how the animation was complicated, and everything connected, swirled, and moved. It could definitely have been smoother, however, and while the music was interesting at first, but it gradually grew to be annoying as hell, forcing me to turn my sound of. When you look at the whole of it though, it's good for a first time submission.

animationking101 responds:

Thanks.
I was gonna finish it nup earlier but i couldnt finish it off properly.

[Fight of Death V1.1]

Nicely animated!

I liked the way characters moved. It was very flexible. It was far too short in any case. If it had been longer, the music would have been better. In this case, however, it was just starting up when the music ended. You should also have either put in a build up scene while waiting for the music to begin. You probably also could have edited the music. The fight scene, although it was animated well, was far to short. It was an okay movie all in all, but I think that you can do a lot better.

xelander responds:

thanks, it helped alot.

[Erebus The Hedgehog]

Don't submit things with no effort.

I really was not happy with that. It bored the hell out of me. Plus, you couldn't just have the guy move, he had to melt into a puddle every time. Please, if you're going to even try to make something like that, try hard. I was really bored the whole thing.

volkain5 responds:

no actualy. my character controls shadows. that wasn't a person, it was his shadow. thats his ability. to control shadows. i know its kickass lol. for ocne somethign original